Feedback on the presentation

5 Main points to consider [from the presentation feedback]:

• The three separate parts are too separate and need to be integrated with each other more.
• The entrance needs to be developed and also the building needs to have hints as to where the entrance is.
• "Too SketchUp-y", Which I take to mean doesn't look real enough and doesn't link together - A series of parts not a single building.
• Plans need more development - they don't read well.
• Develop the theme. I think this will become more evident through developing the interior.