Final alter...

We had tut group and I had two different contradicting thoughts from the two tutors, which actually helped a lot. I also got some good feedback from some of my tut group...


A few thoughts:

• The wall was two flat/ 2D
• The intermingling between the wires and the stairs was distracting from the unbalanced weight (T1)
• The wires were great - but needed to look even more like they were coming out of an old structure (T2)
• There needed to be more interaction between the two materials.

So I went back to SketchUp and did a complete re-tweak:

It's only half rendered - But I like the form a lot more.